She comes for me on quiet nights,
Or when I'm deep in thought,
She prods at all my weaknesses,
She is what I am not.
"What good are you to those you love?"
She whispers in the dark,
"What use does this world have for you,
Who will never leave a mark?"
Ever near, yet never 'there',
She speaks to only me,
Slow poison, no one notices,
Though I want to make them see.
Now her mind draws close to mine,
Temptation ever nearer,
I wish I could avoid her,
But she's inside my mirror
©2008-2009 ~Tomoshibi
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...Hm. I really don't know what to say here. I'm on an inspiration kick, and...yeah.
The first, second, and fourth stanzas of this one have been stewing in my file for about two months, but it was missing something, so I filled in the third stanza and it kinda...clicked. Yey?
The first, second, and fourth stanzas of this one have been stewing in my file for about two months, but it was missing something, so I filled in the third stanza and it kinda...clicked. Yey?
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